A Stillness

The steady drip
   from the kitchen faucet
punctuates the silence
           as I watch the steady rhythm of his sleeping.


Written for: Monday Musings: May 12, 2014 - Image Prompt

6 comments:

Andrea Dawn said...

You are a master at painting a highly detailed image in my imagination with just a few short words. So love your work, Lettie.

Letitia said...

Thank you Andrea. Your kind words mean so very much to me. :)

Aesthetica Poetica - Violet Moon Poetry by Debbie Green Razey said...

Wow love especially 'punctuates the silence' I can actually hear it! Xx

Letitia said...

Thanks Debbie. :)

Bekkie Sanchez said...

I like how the sound punctuates your work! You are the master of brevity! Hugs!

Letitia said...

Hugs back...

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